I am doing the band Tom Petty and the heartbrakers. They started playing in 1974. They are famous for music. This was there first band so they have never been in a different band. There favorite song and album was breakdown and American girl.
Tom Petty and the heartbrakers were formed in Mudcrotch Tennessee. They like to play classic rock. Most of their lyrics are about every day struggles and frustrations and redemption. They never stopped playing classic rock. The members in the band are: Tom Petty (vocal guitarist), Ron Blair (bass), Mike Cambell (guitar), Howie Espon (bass), Stan Lynch(drums), Bemmot Trench(drums). There inspiration was Bruce Springsten.
They had a good career but unfortunately Howie Espon died. But the band is still is playing and last year they played at the super bowl!
Monday, March 10, 2008
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Posted by jack t. at 3:17 PM
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i think that you should write more but what you wrote is great! you can tell that you studied them!
I am doing the band Tom Petty and the heartbrakers. They started playing in 1974. They are famous for music. This was there first band so they have never been in a different band. There favorite song and album was breakdown and American girl.
Jack,
I agree with Jo, you have the info, but you need to organize it so that it flows. This reads like a list. Fix your lead, it puts me to sleep.
Did you adress all of the areas on the outline I gave you?
Jack,
where is your analysis?
Jack,
The flow sucks, there's info. But the flow sucks. Add transition words or something!
Jack,
Everything is great, but come up with a lead that is worthy of the rest of your paper! You know I really like this ban d, so do them justice!
Love
Mom
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